Adapt the situation using new details · Opening a presentation clearly

A 61–101 word writing task with a model and self-review.

Adapt the situation using new details for "Opening a presentation clearly". Apply these two focuses: Identifying the purpose and audience; Providing a presentation roadmap. Write 61–101 words using real or invented details. Try writing before opening the model.

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Today, I will outline a proposal for improving how we welcome new colleagues. The aim is to help them find essential information during their first week. I will begin with the difficulties reported by recent recruits. Then I will describe the proposed guide and explain how we could test it. Finally, I will summarise the resources required and invite your questions. By the end, I hope we can agree on whether to run a small trial.

سأعرض اليوم مقترحًا لتحسين طريقة استقبالنا للزملاء الجدد. الهدف هو مساعدتهم على الوصول إلى المعلومات الأساسية خلال أسبوعهم الأول. سأبدأ بالصعوبات التي أبلغ عنها الموظفون الملتحقون حديثًا. ثم سأصف الدليل المقترح وأشرح كيف يمكننا اختباره. وأخيرًا، سألخص الموارد المطلوبة وأدعوكم إلى طرح أسئلتكم. آمل أن نتفق في النهاية على ما إذا كنا سنجري تجربة محدودة.

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The situation and purpose are clear.I used: Identifying the purpose and audience.I used: Providing a presentation roadmap.Sentences connect and details are consistent.I checked spelling, punctuation and word count.

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